February 19, 2009

Wishing For Summer

I like writing poems.
In class we did a 5 senses poem.
This is mine, and a picture I drew to go with it.

Summer!
Smells like freshly cut grass everywhere.
Looks like sand in the sun.
Feels like the hot hot sand in your toes.
Tastes like hot dogs and hamburgers fresh off the grill.
Sounds like fireworks at night.

6 comments:

  1. Wow when I was your age I never would have been able to right something that amazing.

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  2. The picture is Great and I still can't write poems that well. Good Job

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  3. Wow! you did great, and your dad is right, he can't write poems!
    Nana

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  5. Hey, maybe you can help me make my blog look this good
    Nana

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